Our most popular service, Detailed Development Notes delivers an extremely detailed analysis of your feature film script, together with extensive suggestions on how to improve the next draft and move the project forward. These reports run to 8+ pages of notes (and usually longer), and the service often includes a 10-minute phone call* with your script consultant, offering the opportunity to ask any questions you may have.

*The 10-minute phonecall is a FREE bonus add-on to the Detailed Development Notes service and may, occasionally, be unavailable due to consultant workloads/availability.

Eligible for Talent Connector.

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Industrial Scripts Development Services – Key Facts

- We guarantee to deliver all script reports and feedback within 21 days, although we’ll typically send your report sooner, within 1 week to 10 days. Regretfully due to ever-shifting workloads, we are unable to be more specific than this. We guarantee to deliver your report within 21 days.
- For the same reason, due to our in-demand consultants’ varying workloads, clients are unable to specifically request an individual Industrial Scripts consultant and indeed we do not recommend this approach. Ultimately if your project is to be financed and made, it will be sent to a vast range of industry personel, and the writer will have no control over this process at all. So to try and control it from the outset is futile – a good script is a good script and needs to impress a wide variety of people to get ahead in the industry.
- Prices are all-inclusive – there are no hidden, add-on fees, and we do not charge VAT.
- We accept projects only in PDF form and only by email to feedback@industrialscripts.co.uk
- We offer clients a range of fast-turnaround options, including: one week, weekend, overnight and even same day feedback. Please contact us by emailing info@industrialscripts.co.uk with details of your specific requirements.
- We charge extra fees for projects whose page lengths exceed the limits stated below:

•     Logline – 25 word pitch for a film or TV series.
•     Short Script – screenplay for a short film under 20p.
•     Teleplay – screenplay for a TV episode under 60p.
•     Stageplay – script for a play under 100p.
•     Treatment – extended film synopsis under 10p.
•     Feature Film Script – screenplay for a film under 120p.
•     Book – literary work under 300p.

Please note that scripts which drift over the page lengths listed above are subject to an extra £1.00 fee per page they run over (so an 134 page feature script assessed according to our “Dry Run Service” would cost £138.99). To pay for a longer project, simply log-in to your PayPal account and transfer the relevant extra fees to the email address info@industrialscripts.co.uk
- The report page lengths we specify (ie. a Film Coverage Report delivers 3+ pages of notes and feedback) is the minimum you will receive: you will often receive additional pages of feedback but these should be viewed as a welcome bonus and should not be expected on every report, nor can be guaranteed. The report lengths we specify represent the minimum we guarantee.
- The following services are eligible for our Talent Connector programme: TV Script Analysis; Film Coverage Report; Film Dry-Run Script Report; Detailed Development Notes; Script Editing; Detailed Book Analysis; Script Doctoring.
- We use PayPal, the world’s most secure, popular online payment gateway to process all payments. You do not need to have a PayPal account to purchase from us, as PayPal accepts all major credit and debit cards.

Industrial Scripts – Submission Process

We accept material BY EMAIL ONLY IN ADOBE PDF form – please ensure that you complete both stages below when submitting your project for feedback.

1. Book your feedback service through our ScriptStore using the shopping cart to the right.

2. You will receive a confirmation of payment via email shortly after your purchase. Please reply to this email with your project attached (as PDF), and your project title in CAPS in the subject line.

***In the unlikely event you don’t receive a purchase receipt email within 15 minutes of your purchase then please email your script and details to feedback@industrialscripts.co.uk***